Zenith of Desire: The Hollywood Incubus

So the pressure is getting to me. As I said before, I’ve been re-re-editing the Chapters I already wrote. I’m currently at the 1999 Grammys scene, where he attends arm-in-arm with Beyoncé on the red carpet. She sits beside him as he wins four Grammys.

Should I just write them going wild that same night for the R18 Chapter that’s been pressuring me? I also think it makes sense after more than 200 Chapters have passed, especially since he’s an Incubus and there is no sex.

She’s just shy of six months from turning [@g£], and it’s not like he wouldn’t do it with a s¡xt££n-year-old or a forty-year-old. From the information I collected, she also lost her virginity at around this age in our world.

Since he’s an incubus, a high-pressure, high-glamour night like the 1999 Grammys could naturally escalate into an intense scene.

So should I go through with it? Second thing: the same circumstances apply to the scene where Paris Hilton pulls him into her room and they get freaky. He just uses magic and watches her going wild with her fingers She will be 18, if you’re wondering.

Should I also change that scene to make it his first if Beyoncé changes doesn’t happen? It’s about 50K words away from Paris scenes, though. What are your thoughts, without considering the age factor?

And reply quickly, as I am currently writing this.