I Eat Monster and Gain Powers

Chapter 49: You’ve cost me something tonight

Nobody moved. Nobody breathed.

The Feyra knelt in the wreckage at Elara’s feet, head bowed low enough that its robed shoulders nearly touched the broken stone, and the word it had spoken still hung in the air like something too heavy to have actually been said out loud.

Mother.

Mikaela’s mind refused it outright, some part of her still scrambling to make the sentence mean something else, anything else, even as every instinct she had screamed that she’d heard it exactly right the first time.

Elara looked down at the creature with an expression that held nothing of surprise in it at all. Just tired. Bone deep, ancient tired, the kind that didn’t come from one bad night or even one bad decade.

”I warned you,” she said, voice still steady, still quiet, and somehow that steadiness was worse than shouting would have been. ”I told you what would happen if you kept feeding, if you kept giving into your Shom’s feelings. Now look, it has cost you everything. Losing to a damn Shom. I told you it would end like this. And here you are anyway. Pitiful.”

”I’m sorry, mother,” the creature said again, softer this time, almost a whisper.

Then Elara changed.

It happened slow at first, a shiver running through her frame like something underneath her skin had decided it no longer needed to hide, and then all at once, her spine straightening past anything an old woman’s body should have allowed, her shawl tearing loose at the seams as her shoulders broadened and her height climbed past anything human, past anything Eto had seen even standing over the kneeling Feyra a moment before.

The cane clattered to the stone, forgotten.

What stood in Elara’s place was taller than the creature it had raised its hand toward, robes forming out of nothing the same way Finn’s had, darker, older, edged with something that made the very air around it feel thin and cold. Where the smaller creature’s eyes had glowed a sickly slitted green, hers burned deeper, older, a color that had no proper name, something between black and violet that seemed to swallow whatever light fell near it.

”Oh gods,” Freya breathed, sword forgotten entirely in her hand. ”Oh gods, she was one too. She was a damn Feyra too.”

The kneeling Feyra didn’t rise. It simply began to unravel where it knelt, its dark shape thinning, stretching, drawn upward in threads of shadow that curled into the larger figure now looming above them, absorbed piece by piece until there was nothing left kneeling on the stone at all, only the towering shape that had once worn Elara’s face standing whole and singular in its place.

”It was just a piece of me,” she said, and her voice now carried none of Elara’s warmth, only a vast, hollow patience that made every hair on Mikaela’s arms stand up. ”A fragment. I made it long ago, when I was dying, when the loneliness of what I am became too much even for something as old as I have grown. It was my hunger given a small shape. My grief given a small shape. It was a mistake, and now it has returned to me, and I am whole again.”

She looked at them then, each of them in turn, and there was nothing in that gaze that resembled fear or respect or even proper interest. Eto. Freya. Mikaela. Nora, still clutching Finn’s hand where she knelt in the rubble. Finn himself, unconscious, chest rising shallow and slow.

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Insects. The word didn’t need to be spoken for all of them to feel it in the way she looked at them, small, temporary, barely worth the attention she was sparing them now.

”You’ve cost me something tonight,” she said. ”Something very important. I do not forget such things, and I do not forgive them either.” Her voice dropped lower, and somehow that made it worse, less a threat than a simple statement of fact. ”I will have what’s owed to me. Not tonight. Perhaps not for years. I am patient in ways none of you could understand. I will come for it when you have long since forgotten to be afraid, when you have convinced yourselves this was the end of something instead of merely a pause in it. And I will feed.”

Then, slow, deliberate, she opened her robes.

Bodies spilled out onto the broken stone, dozens of them, far more than the chamber should have been able to hide, skeletons still dressed in the rags of whatever they’d been wearing when death had found them. Some were fresh enough that flesh still clung in places, grey and wrong. Others had gone to bone entirely, clothing rotted to little more than dust and thread. A few looked older than any of them could easily place, armor rusted through, weapons corroded past recognition, remnants of decades, maybe longer, all of it kept somewhere in whatever space existed beneath those robes.

One of the more recent bodies rolled to a stop near Mikaela’s feet, and she recognized the coat before she let herself recognize the face.

Kaplan.

”He’s been dead,” she said, numb, staring down at what was left of him. ”He’s been dead for, gods, at least a week. Longer.”

”He served his purpose,” the creature said, utterly without remorse. ”A useful tool. A willing one, in the end, once he understood what refusing would cost him. I fed on him slowly, kept him moving, kept him useful, long after there was anything left in him worth calling a man.”

She rose into the air then, unhurried, robes settling still around her despite the height.

Eto moved.

He took one step forward, fast, faster than a man his size should have been able to manage even whole, let alone broken and bleeding the way he was, lightning sparking weak but present along a fist already rising.

She didn’t flee.

She simply turned her head, and looked at him.

Her eyes held something in them that had no business existing in a face at all, power that felt less like a gaze and more like gravity itself deciding to notice him, ancient and vast and utterly indifferent to whatever strength he thought he still had left.

It hit all of them at once.

A pressure descended over the whole chamber, not sound this time, nothing so crude, just weight, absolute and total, pressing down on every last one of them until knees buckled and breath caught and thought itself seemed to slow to nothing. Eto’s fist froze mid swing. Freya’s sword slipped from fingers gone numb. Mikaela felt her whole body forced down onto the broken stone, unable to so much as turn her head, and beside her Elara’s true form, or whatever remained of the old woman inside it, held them all there, pinned, silent, for one long unbearable moment.

She wanted them to understand. Mikaela could feel that much even through the crushing weight of it, could feel the deliberate cruelty in exactly how long she chose to hold them there before letting go. This wasn’t retreat. This wasn’t fear. She was leaving because she chose to leave, and she wanted every one of them to know the difference down in their bones.

Then it lifted.

All at once, the pressure simply gone, and she rose the rest of the way through the shattered ceiling, robes catching the moonlight one final time before the night swallowed her whole, gone without a sound, without so much as a stirred breeze to mark her passing.

The chamber went silent.

Mikaela gasped air back into lungs that had forgotten how, Freya collapsed fully onto her hands and knees, sword abandoned on the stone beside her, and Nora had curled herself protectively over Finn’s unconscious body, shaking, though whether from fear or exhaustion or both it was impossible to say.

Eto knelt where he’d fallen.

He stayed there long after the others had started to stir, staring up through the broken ceiling at a sky that held nothing now but stars and drifting dust, breathing hard, blood still running slow down the side of his face, every muscle in his body screaming from a fight he hadn’t come close to winning.

Alive. All of them alive, against every reasonable expectation the last hour had given them.

But it wasn’t enough. It wasn’t close to enough, and he knew it sitting there in the wreckage of a century old church, fists curled useless in his lap, watching the empty sky where something ancient and terrible had simply chosen to leave rather than been made to.

The hunt wasn’t over.

It had only just begun.